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Monday, April 4, 2011

There are places I remember all my life

In my life - this is a very beautiful and truly amazing song by beatles.
(Go to this link for the song- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ukbbPJirTaE)

It was so refreshing when I listened to it now, that i just felt like writing few lines based on this theme.. It is not meant to be in par with the original lyrics..but its just my thought to do something different and be lil crazy :)

Here I have retained the first 4 lines of the lyrics and then added my own thoughts..
So here it goes ..my second attempt at writing a kinda lyrics :)..for which i can only dream of adding music to it..if i could :)


There are places I remember all my life
though some have changed
some forever, not for better
some have gone and some remain


There are days I remember all my life
Not because of me, cause of people around
Not many are such people, so I do remember most

There are pains I remember all my life
Some fought with courage, some with tears
But pains don't last long, so I do remember all

There are moments I remember all my life
Some have gone by, some unnoticed, unwanted by many
Was not so long ago, so I do remember still

There are places I remember all my life
Though some are miles away, some are within reach
Some had magic, cannot be recreated, never ever can be
But some places are yet to be seen and yet to come
And one place is here, not yet gone and still remain
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2 comments:

  1. May be you can add music to it... with the help of your guitar teacher.. :)

    try it.. let me know if it works. And hey nice lyrics btw.. :)

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  2. thnks shyam :) ..somday may b ill try that also :) as of now let the music wait for som more poems :)

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