Hi readers,
I donno whether to term this as a poem or not, but while writing this what i kept in mind is to link each line with the previous line..
It was just a way to kill my time now, but i guess this attempt did not end up that badly :) ..your feedback would help me to continue to post more such stuffs :) or may be its a one day wonder i donno :)
Am I thinking to write something?
Am I thinking to write something? Are you trying to read the same?
Hey!!Are you the same with whom I used to have a wonderful time?
Have those wonderful times gone by? If so why don’t we get back again?
Can you get back on this to me? If yes, can I plan something, so that you’ll be beside me?
If you were not beside me, I wonder where would I be?
Would I be then still thinking to write something?
If that something is all about you and me, then why don’t you help me?
If not, would you help me to realize that I have written what I wanted to write?
And what I wanted to write about is. ..Am I thinking to write something?
hey thatz cool :)
ReplyDeletesurely you are gone crazy with some one.
hey thanks dude..hahah m gettin wat u pointin at :) but no man..m not yet that crazy with anyone :) its just dat i knw wat its all abt from many sources:)
ReplyDeleteAm I thinking to write some comment? Are you trying to read the same?
ReplyDeleteHey!! Am I really writing this or am I day-dreaming? Can you get back to me on this ?
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Nice 'Unusual' attempt at poetry.. keep writing dude... :)
thnks a lot Shyam...yes its unusual:)..wil definitly try to post wenever i get some ideas to write :)
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